…LOVE IS A CHOICE…
My love for you is so great and divine,
there's nothing else that i could ask for,
whenever you twinkle, you're so unique and genuine,
whenever you shine, you make me ask for more.
Love is powerful, love is vulnerable,
when you love people, you keep on loving them,
when you love others anything is possible,
make their problem...your problem;stick with them to the end.
Love is anything and your heart will certainly be wrung,
if you want to make sure of keeping it intact,
you must give your heart to no one,
so try kick back and just relax.
My love for you is beggining to burst,
just like the beauty that surrounds...THE UNIVERSE.
-By: Sani Fuimaono
The reason for naming it what it is…is because love is so powerful that you must make the choice of holding on to it, because you never know what might happen, and you might not have that same feeling ever again. There are many ways of naming this sonnet, but for me love is a choice because we all have the free agency to choose and we are also accountable for the choices that we make. Everyone has their own way of what love is to them. And they have a certain criteria that they follow, and judge "LOVE" based upon what ever there criteria may be. Therefore this is why I named my sonnet "LOVE IS A CHOICE."
In my first stanza I was trying to talk about how reat my love was for her. "My love for you is so great and divine," means my love for her means so much and it is well pleasing. The next line, "There's nothing else I could ask for," means that I would not trade anything in the world for her. And I don't ask anything of her. " When ever you twinkle, you're so unique and genuine." This line means that when I see here she stands out from the crowd. It also means that she is one of a kind, and therer is only one of her. The next line " When ever you shine, you make me ask for more," means when she does aspiring things, it makes me want to see more of it. Therefore this is what the lines in my first stanza means.
The second stanza talks a little bit more about what love is and what to do when you found your true love. The first line " Love is powerful, Love is vulnerable," means love has a lot of authority, and is easily persuadable. The second line of my stanza " When you love people, you keep on loving them," means to don't do anything to jepordize your relationship and also your friendship that you have in contact with lovely spouse. The next line "When you love others anything is possible," means that you can do anything you want to do if want to, because you treat people the same way you want to be treated. The last line of my stanza "Make there problem...your problem; stick with them to the end," means whaever conflicts that your love has no matter what it is...you stick with them to the end. Therefore this is what the lines in my second stanza means.
The third stanza talks about keeping your love close to you. The first line "Love is anything anything and your heart will ceartainly be wrung," means that love is anything and it feels like your heart is being pressed upon. The second line of my stanza "If you want to make sure of keeping it intact," means that you must keep your loves heart close. The next line "You must give your heart to no one," means that you must not let your heart be fooled, because it could be your last chance. The last line of my stanza is "So try kick back and just relax." This means that you should just take a step back and take a deep breath and relax your self. Therefore this is what the lines in my third stanza means.
The last two[2] lines of my sonnet just talks about how my love for her is. The first line "My love for you is beginning to burst," means that my love for her is hard to try and keep inside, and it just needs to be shown. The last line of my sonnet is "Just like the beauty that surrounds...THE UNIVERSE." This means that my love for is big that it takes up the whole entire universe. There this is what the lines in my sonnet means.
Wednesday, April 18, 2007
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My love for you is so great and divine,
there's nothing else that I could ask for,
whenever you twinkle, you're so unique and genuine,
whenever you shine, you make me ask for more.
Love is powerful, love is vulnerable,
when you love people, you keep on loving them,
when you love others anything is possible,
make their problem...your problem; stick with them to the end.
Love is anything and your heart will certainly be wrung,
if you want to make sure of keeping it intact,
you must give your heart to no one,
so try kick back and just relax.
My love for you is beginning to burst,
just like the beauty that surrounds...THE UNIVERSE.
[The reason for naming it what it is…] change this part to “I named my sonnet “Love is a Choice” because” is because love is so powerful that you must make the choice of holding on to it. You never know what might happen, and you might not have that same feeling ever again. There are many different ways of naming my sonnet, but for me love is a choice because we all have the free agency to choose and we are also accountable for the choices that we make. Everyone has their own view of what love is to them. And they have a certain criteria that they follow, and everyone judges “LOVE” based upon what ever their own criteria may be. Therefore this is why I named my sonnet “LOVE IS A CHOICE.”
In my first stanza I was trying to talk about how reat[real? What do you mean? I think you have a spelling error] my love was for her. “My love for you is so great and divine," means my love for her means so much and as well as it is well pleasing. The next line, "There's nothing else I could ask for," means that I would not trade anything in the world for her. And I don't ask anything of her. "When ever you twinkle, you're so unique and genuine." This line means that when I see here she stands out from the crowd. It also means that she is one of a kind, and there is only one of her. The next line "When ever you shine, you make me ask for more," means when she does aspiring things, it makes me want to see more of it. Therefore this is what the lines in my first stanza means. The second stanza talks a little bit more about what love is and what to do when you found your true love. The first line "Love is powerful, Love is vulnerable," means love has a lot of authority, and is easily persuadable. Love sometimes has so much power over us that it makes us do things we wouldn’t normally do. The second line of my stanza, “When you love people, you keep on loving them," means to not do anything that will jeopardize your relationship and also your friendship that you have in contact with your lovely spouse.
Don’t put spaces after your first quotation marks. You have a good start. Expand more on some of your ideas and continue what you have, then you’ll reach the 3 page minimum. Good Job!
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